Seriously, folks, if you've never rewritten something you're either a complete literary genius or not interested if it doesn't work out the first time around.
What prompted this? I had a few people tell me that they thought the original was a romance. Ack! So not where I was going. Yes, there's a bit of romance in it but it is far from the main story. And that got me thinking that maybe I'm just taking too long to get to the main story.
So I cut the first 3 chapters and restarted with chapter 4 and changed the POV.
I already think it's at least a better start. I think it's more likely to garner attention from someone I might be querying since it cuts right into the action. We'll see how it goes.
INK SLINGER HAS MOVED
This blog has moved to Cheryl Murphy Writes: Chronicles of an Ink Slinger. It became too hard to mirror to this site. Lots of glitches and such. I don't do much to maintain this site anymore so if you're wondering why things might look a bit wonky, that would be it.
If you've navigated here and discovered this dead blog, using the "Subscribe via email" feature in the sidebar will subscribe you to the new site feed, so that's a plus. ;)
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I hope you'll join me at my new home!